ext_314335 ([identity profile] eleonora-egrene.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sethgray 2009-08-19 05:36 am (UTC)

From what I can remember the last time I reread the chapter (a couple of weeks ago I think) I'd say that the cop is weird. That whole section is not important for the plot, it only shows Regan's personality. In the later chapters you have almost nothing that doesn't further the plot, so that makes this stand out.

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